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mgchan
01-22-2004, 11:22 AM
The Betty Boop poem contest is here at last,
you've only been asking for it for the past year.

For all you members that's your next task.
Let's get those poems going, which we'll hold dear.

You're all doing this because you love Betty,
it's certainly not about the customery prizes.

We want poems from your heart which sounds petty,
like losing weight, it's not about the smaller sizes.

[It may or may not come across as a poem, but I tried! LOL]


Rules:

1. Submit original poems created by you only, do not modify existing poems.

2. Do not use foul language or curse words in the poems.

3. Only one entry per member.

Prizes:

http://www.bettyboop.com/forums/photos/V10924.gif
1st Prize - Chevy Betty Desk Clock (8.25" tall) by Vandor & a T-shirt or Sweatshirt

http://www.bettyboop.com/forums/photos/westland6950.gif
2nd Prize - Wild West Betty Mini Globe (45mm) by Westland & a T-shirt or Sweatshirt

3rd Prize - A T-shirt or Sweatshirt

Boopsie-Cola
01-31-2004, 11:56 AM
wow, that clock is so cute, looks like im gona have to start writing a poem, coz i sure dont know what to make!
bess xx

10eke
01-31-2004, 12:43 PM
I don't know if this is the right thread to post it, but here's my poem:


If only my hear was black,
With curls at the front
And at the back
If only my eyes were green,
Of the most beautiful shade
you’ve ever seen
If only my mouth was like cherry
The most delicious red
It’s almost scary
If only I could look as glam in a short dress
Look in the mirror mirror
And say ‘I look good, yes!!!’
I hear a clock strike
It’s three at night.
I open my eyes
And think ’…right…
It was only a dream…

I’m not betty boop…’



there, I did my best... Hope you guys like it!!

DEADPOOL
01-31-2004, 03:11 PM
Hey, i think im gonna have to try and win that snow globe, that looks the best to me!

Neckless
01-31-2004, 03:15 PM
Here goes...hehehe

Here's the scoop
It's no poop!
I'd fly the coop
for Betty Boop!!

My hair may droop
While I drive the loop
I'll jump thru a hoop
for Betty Boop

Loop-d-loop
Hoop-d-hoop
I brought the troop
2-C Betty Boop!!

BBooper
02-02-2004, 02:46 PM
great peoms guys!!!

BBooper
xxx

Aminal
02-03-2004, 10:06 AM
Here is a poem I just made up about Betty. It's not much as it took me only the last 30 minutes to write ( can't you tell lol)
But I didn't even know about the contest till I just looked at this page so I thought it would be fun . I know it's not a real cheery ( I can't spelly the word cheer-eee??) poem or happy but it was fun to write. I haven't even tried writing poetry of any kind in 15 years.
Tribute to Betty
By Edward G. Marshall Sr.
(Aminal)

You came to be many years ago
even before I was a lad,
So pretty an so popular
what happened was so sad,

You had it all you sexy wench
and were as daring as could be.
But the censors said this won't do
You can no longer be wild and free.

So they rewrote who you were
and made you what THEY wanted.
Trouble is it wasn't popular
We loved what you flaunted!

So Betty You just faded out,
but not quite; not completely
You'll always live in our hearts
as long as there are still fans, like me!

JennyBoop
02-03-2004, 11:13 AM
:D I like that!! Good job.

Aminal
02-03-2004, 11:28 AM
thank you :)

10eke
02-03-2004, 11:48 AM
aaaw, I like that! Really nice!!

BBooper
02-03-2004, 02:10 PM
awww! i love it! it's so cute nd true!

BBooper
xxx

leboop448
02-08-2004, 09:20 AM
This poem is about 10 min. old. Here goes:

There is this Lady who has her own special ways
and has been with me since my early school days.

She is way cool!
and has become the Mistress of this group--

She is the one, the only Ms. BETTY BOOP. leboop448

BBooper
02-08-2004, 10:35 AM
:D that's a good one! :D short and sweet! just how i like peoms :D ;) good job! :D

BBooper
xxx

JennyBoop
02-08-2004, 10:37 AM
:D That's A cute one also. Oh all these talented people I'm honored to be in your presence.:D :D

BBooper
02-08-2004, 10:39 AM
i know what you mean!! i can't write peoms for toffee!

BBooper
xxx

JennyBoop
02-08-2004, 10:40 AM
Well don't feel so bad I can't carry A tune in A basket either.:rolleyes:

BBooper
02-08-2004, 10:42 AM
lol! :P

BBooper
xxx

JennyBoop
02-08-2004, 10:58 AM
:rolleyes: Or sew, or write poems, ect.

BBooper
02-08-2004, 10:59 AM
lol! i can sew but thats about it! :P

BBooper
xxx

10eke
02-08-2004, 01:32 PM
Nice one leboop448!!!!

Aminal
02-09-2004, 06:32 AM
I like it leboop448, Short sweet and to the point :o)

DEADPOOL
02-09-2004, 08:54 AM
Nice poems Animal and Leboop448, good stuff.

DEADPOOL
02-09-2004, 08:56 AM
But i should warn you, im gonna enter, when I'm fully awake and right a nice sweet poem, that will royally bore all of you into not voting!! LOL

Well im being a sport and entering right. LOL

JennyBoop
02-09-2004, 05:09 PM
Bring it on Deadpool.:D

Aminal
02-09-2004, 05:19 PM
I can use a lirrle r & r so lets hear it deadpool lol :)

Bikerbettyboop
02-09-2004, 06:44 PM
Hey great poems! You folks are super talented!!

Bikerbettyboop
02-09-2004, 06:45 PM
Hey Aminal... I liked your poem ...

and what is lirrle? ha ha....

Aminal
02-09-2004, 06:58 PM
little-- with r's

Bikerbettyboop
02-09-2004, 07:00 PM
I know.. I just had to tease you a lirrle

Bikerbettyboop
02-09-2004, 07:04 PM
Hope you have a good sense of humor and don't mind my teasing you so much. I enjoyed your poem too.

boopitized
02-09-2004, 07:24 PM
boop boop de doop
go round in a loop de doop
with short black hair
and an inicent stair
a cute red dress
relives you of stress
we call her our betty boop

Aminal
02-09-2004, 07:37 PM
cute :) Yes I do have a sense of humor. I'm the big tease in my house, just ask my 15 year old daughter. I'm forever picking on her ( and visa versa) rrrrrrrrrrrr lirrle r&r lol :)

Aminal
02-09-2004, 07:40 PM
that's cute boopitized and that she certainly does with laughter :)

Bikerbettyboop
02-10-2004, 12:39 PM
Cute poem Boopitized!!

Glad you have such a great sense of humor Aminal. It must be fun to have a daughter. I only had one son and 2 nephews so we never had any girls in the family and I sure wish we had. I'm hoping to have a great neice someday!!

BBooper
02-10-2004, 03:19 PM
lol aminal!! was that DEADPOOL fishing for the sorry vote??? lol! JK! :D

BBooper
xxx

Bikerbettyboop
02-12-2004, 03:08 PM
Seems like Deadpool is always fishing for something... he's almost as bad as me.. but not quite... ha ha.......

BBooper
02-12-2004, 03:16 PM
lol!!! anymore poems?? i don't seem to have the time or energy to do one! :(

BBooper
xxx

Bikerbettyboop
02-12-2004, 07:24 PM
I'm still working on one but am having a hard time getting it to make sense and rhyme too... that's the tough part. But you can bet it'll be a doozy when I'm done with it.

Boopsie-Cola
02-20-2004, 05:11 PM
man im usualy quite good at making up poems, but 4 some reason i just cant do it wen it coms to betty!!!! lol everytym i try to think of something all i get is the betty boop theme tune playing in my mind!!! "made of pen and ink, she can win you with a wink, aint she cute (somthing somthing)...sweeeeeeeeEEEEeeeeet betty!" "those eyes that pretty nose ......dah dah dha dont know the words dha dah dah dah dah !!!! :)

Boopsie-Cola
02-20-2004, 05:13 PM
im gona go to bed now with a notepad and pen, im determined to have somthing by the morning!!!!!

Aminal
02-20-2004, 08:52 PM
I found the best way to write a poem is to clear my mind and just let a single thought or line form. after that the rest just falls into place :)

10eke
02-20-2004, 09:19 PM
That's how I do it, I start with one good line...

lilhommieb74
02-20-2004, 10:35 PM
this is dedicated to betty boop.

Leaves may change
from green to gold,
the sky from blue to gray,
A summer's afternoon becomes
a sparkiling winter day,
people change,
and places change,
and time keeps changing,too,
But one thing always stays the same-
the love i feel for you

Boopsie-Cola
02-21-2004, 03:11 AM
heres my entry, mg is it ok if i edit later if i want to change or add somthing??

Boopsie-Cola
02-21-2004, 03:17 AM
curvy flirty ms betty boop
we love her shes our princess, our idol
the sweeet way she sings "boop oop a doop"
even inspired the likes of marilyn monroe

her cartoons we watch day in day out
to experience her come to life on the screen
wer amazed by her every move and sexy lil pout
nothing this gorgeous has ever been seen

we witness betty emerge from a dog
as we watch her cartoons in black and white
so beautiful and to think she is 70 yrs old?
to still have such an effect doesnt seem rite!

every1 that watched betty fell under her spell
then all came together on the bb website
they all became friends and got on so well
a boop oop a dooping family 4 life!!! :)

hope u like :) bess xxx ;)

mgchan
02-21-2004, 06:11 AM
All of these poems are fantastic!

It's going to be a tough one for all of us to judge!!!

mgchan
02-21-2004, 06:13 AM
Originally posted by Boopsie-Cola
heres my entry, mg is it ok if i edit later if i want to change or add somthing??

Even as moderators, we have to play fair! :P

BBooper
02-21-2004, 06:54 AM
i agree! i don't think i could choose the best one!!

BBooper
xxx

JennyBoop
02-21-2004, 10:53 AM
Yea i wouldn't be able to judge this one either. Good luck.:D

BBooper
02-21-2004, 11:06 AM
lol! the good luck boost of confidence! :P haha! i think it's up to everyone in a pll to choose a winner ;)

BBooper
xxx

JennyBoop
02-21-2004, 03:31 PM
Oh Ok thar sounds cool:cool:

Neckless
02-21-2004, 08:14 PM
Hi Boopers!!

I feel so lost because I don't get to check in and loop the scoop until Friday or Saturday afternoon.
How's all the Boopers doing today? I've been busy re-arranging my house today.

BBooper
02-22-2004, 06:31 AM
i'm good! have you entered any of the comp's yet???

BBooper
xxx

Boopsie-Cola
02-22-2004, 09:49 AM
Originally posted by mgchan
Even as moderators, we have to play fair! :P

but i fot every1 had the power to edit their own post :confused:

10eke
02-22-2004, 09:52 AM
That's what I thought...

Valerie
02-22-2004, 12:34 PM
here is my french contribution:

So your name is Betty Boop
You make everyone go for a loop .
You're so nice and so sweet
You make evry fan's heart beat .

What could we say about you ?
Except that we all love you !
Thank you so much for what you are .

Please never go away so far
that we would forget your look,
and have to remember you from a book!

BBooper
02-22-2004, 01:54 PM
awww! i like that one! :D

You can edit your own posts just it's not fair on other contestant's to change your original entry. understand now? :)

BBooper
xxx

10eke
02-22-2004, 02:26 PM
valerie, I really like that one!
Oooh, like that! I knew that, but I thought typing mistakes!

JennyBoop
02-23-2004, 02:19 PM
That's A good one Valerie.:D

Valerie
02-24-2004, 06:08 AM
thanks nothing is nice enough for our BB

Bikerbettyboop
02-25-2004, 08:11 PM
Very nice poem Valerie!!! Oh boy the competition has really heated up hasn't it?

Valerie
02-26-2004, 03:16 AM
thanks bbboop, well i've just received a book translated from US by max fleicher and bud counihan! i got it from ebay! i love it, do you know this book i know that we can't buy it anymore now!! another great piece of collection!

Bikerbettyboop
02-26-2004, 09:49 AM
No, I am not familiar with that book. But it sounds like a wonderful addition to your collection.

I hope someday to meet someone from the Fleischer family. Hopefully at a Betty Boop convention.

Valerie
02-26-2004, 10:50 AM
that would be the best thing that could happen to one of us! no chance for me though!well who knows!!!!

BBooper
02-26-2004, 12:43 PM
ooooh! sound's neat! :D hehe, did i just say neat! :P post a pik if you can!!!!! :D

BBooper
xxx

JennyBoop
02-26-2004, 02:59 PM
Yes you did just say NEAT!! Hey that cool though:D Hey everyone has A geek moment in their life.:D I'm jst teasing you BBooper love ya anyway.:D

Bikerbettyboop
02-26-2004, 03:51 PM
Haaaa Jenny that was funny teasing poor BBooper for saying "neat" when you just said "cool and geek" in the same post.. hahahah.

Valerie
02-27-2004, 02:26 AM
!!!!!!!!!!suppose i have to LOL!!!!!hihihi

Bikerbettyboop
02-27-2004, 09:01 AM
Ok here is my contribution to the poem contest and no laughing allowed cause this is pretty serious.....


Betty looks so fine in her denim jeans

As she climbs on board that mean machine

She heads out on the highway, destination unknown

She’s riding with the wind, boys let her roam

Watch her ride. See her ride.

She’s the queen of the road

Her name is Betty Boop

With black spit curls and eyes so green

Don’t mess with her. You know what I mean?

Betty loves the sound of that engine roar

Riding down the highway her spirits soar.

She’s got Pudgy there in the old side car

But everyone knows that Betty’s the star

Watch her ride. See her ride.

Everyone loves this biker babe

Her name is Betty Boop and she knows the scoop

So get out of her way… boop…boop..a… doop

Valerie
02-27-2004, 09:35 AM
great, i realise we all have litterary talents!!!!!!!!

Bikerbettyboop
02-27-2004, 11:02 AM
Glad you like it... Don thought it was "funny"

"Funny" I asked?

"What's so funny about it?"

"Oh nothing" he said and then walked away laughing.

Ha! I worked hard on this... who knows, I may even make it into a song.... where did I put my guitar???????

Valerie
02-27-2004, 01:07 PM
BB has taken it to play her hawaian tunes!!!!!!!!

Bikerbettyboop
02-27-2004, 01:31 PM
Hey good answer... ha ha!!

Do you like Betty Boop in Hawaiian images? Character Collectibles is bringing out a whole new Hawaiian line of Betty Boop this spring and I can't hardly wait to see them.

Valerie
02-27-2004, 01:35 PM
i like what they do some of my items are character collectibles i forgot to say that some of them i bought from a belgium girl who used to sell things on ebay!
do you like my tea pot?

JennyBoop
02-27-2004, 03:16 PM
That is A great poem BikerBetty.:D

10eke
02-27-2004, 06:40 PM
it is a wonderfull poem indeed! I like it a lot!

livingbooper
02-28-2004, 12:19 PM
Oh goodie! I finally found the poems! Great job everyone!
I'm afraid that I've got writer's block... I'm hoping to pull soemthing out of my hat at the end.

BikerBettyBoop, I know that you were fretting over this poem but I think it's great. I'm glad you posted it!
As to Don's reaction...well... many guys just aren't into poetry unless it's in a card they are trying to pick for someone. They don't inderstand it.
But I think your poem about BikerBetty rocks!:D

There are so many good entires... it will be hard to choose!

MISSTERRYMAN
02-28-2004, 02:22 PM
The competition
Oh Betty with your big wide eyes,
I sometimes stare into the mirror and despise,
That your only a cartoon.
For if you were real,
you would most certainly be,
a stunner with a big future.

I know you are still around,
but other things are too.
Like Mickey and Minnie and Donald and Daisy.
But Betty I`ll always like you better than Hello Kitty and Maisy.
So dont despair , I`ll always care.

All my Love,
Sassyxxxx
[

BBooper
02-29-2004, 07:48 AM
cute poem!

BBooper
xxx

JennyBoop
02-29-2004, 10:52 AM
Yes it is A very cute poem.:D

bexi3
03-01-2004, 09:45 AM
Ok, here goes!

It's difficult to know, just where to start;
She was the one with a fairly small part!
A dog was how she was first portrayed -
A character some say she should never have played,
For she was clearly the star of the show,
And this is something her makers now know!

From dog to a lady, the transition was smooth,
She was sexy and sophisticated, and managed to prove,
That it didn't matter what she was at the start,
she was always destined for a bigger part!!

What is it exactly that makes us obsess,
About the girl who wears that red dress?
Is it her eyes that glimmer and shine,
Or is it that figure - so curvy and divine....

Or maybe it's what she's done right here.
She's managed to bring everyone so near!
Miles and miles part our forum,
Oceans and seas, time zones, and then some!
But still she's managed to create this space,
where it doesn't matter that I'm in another place
I can still sit and communicate with each individual friend,
Who, hopefully, I might get to meet in the end!

So in conclusion to my babbling rhyme,
I urge everybody to take the time,
to get to know the lady in question -
and maybe even add a suggestion,
on how we can all pull together,
and make sure Ms Boop stays round forever!!


****Takes a bow*****

Valerie
03-01-2004, 10:18 AM
hie Bexi, nothing else to say but splendid wonderfull i've just read your poem and my mouth stay opened!!!!!!!!!!!
good luck

bexi3
03-01-2004, 10:47 AM
Aw thanks Valerie! hehe! xx

BBooper
03-01-2004, 11:02 AM
hey! thats a great poem!! this is going to be tough!

BBooper
xxx

livingbooper
03-01-2004, 11:24 AM
Hey Bexi! That is a wonderful poem.
I really enjoyed this one a lot.
Very very good!:D

livingbooper
03-01-2004, 11:25 AM
I've had really terrible writer's block.
Now I've been working on a simple haiku, but still nothing! Grrrr!

BBooper
03-01-2004, 11:27 AM
lol! are the compition's ended now or tomorrow?

BBooper
xxx

livingbooper
03-01-2004, 11:29 AM
Black curls, red lips, coquettish wink
Our Betty Boop is divine



O.k.
I forced a haiku.
This will have to do for now....

---Lizzy

BBooper
03-01-2004, 12:34 PM
lol! it's cute! :P

BBooper
xxx

DEADPOOL
03-01-2004, 05:28 PM
Man i cant think of anything!

JennyBoop
03-01-2004, 05:39 PM
:eek: Boy there is alot of talented and creative people on this site. Great Job everyone.:D

DEADPOOL
03-01-2004, 05:40 PM
OK here it goes, right of the top of my head and hopefully original!

Hey Betty your so dirty,sometimes it makes me wanna get flirty,
Knowing your a minx always makes me think,
how do you squeeze into that tiny pink thing!
Well when I see you riding your bike i always say,
lets go that way,alway the way to betty heaven,
on a harley dressed in tight leather!
Thats right Betty we know you got a rough sexy side,
and im full of pride when i say Betty,
You'd be a sexy wife!!

BTW, Betty is also know as Boopsie-Cola! So in a way this is mega aimedat someone!!

Bikerbettyboop
03-01-2004, 07:05 PM
Wow Deadpool that is some poem!!

Good luck to everyone!!!

10eke
03-02-2004, 02:25 AM
You write more of this for boopsie-cola? You should! I like it!